Friday, September 23, 2011

Web of Love

Going back 4 years ago, I wrote a poem for my girlfriend. She loved it very much and the look on her face made me feel so good. She seemed so much more happy then if I were to have bought her something material. After that day I began to look up and research romantic poetry and try to find a poem that I thought could express my feelings for her. I came accross this poem called "The Web of Love." IT WAS PERFECT. I printed it out and had it made up on nice paper, laminated it and attached a rose to it. I told her that I did not write this one, but it explains things perfectly and I dont think i could have done any better to describe my feelings. I have posted this poem for all of you to enjoy also. The author seems to be named "Titilade" and I wish I knew her/him to let her/him know what a beautiful job they have done in writing this poem. ENJOY!!!


The Web of Love
On a beautiful moon night
Creatively
You worked your art
You spun a web
Around my heart
How beautifully
Your deeds have spread
Each intricately
Woven thread
With strands of care
You dried my tears
Your gentleness
Dispelled my fears
Your wisdom
Helped me understand
And patiently
You held my hand
To give me courage
To brave the storm
With kindness
You have kept me warm
Your passion
Lit a glowing fire
That filled my soul
With sweet desire
You're all
That I was dreaming of
For the web you spun
Was made of love
~ Titilade


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  1. Jason CuneoOctober 11, 2011 at 6:41 PM

    This a truly beautiful poem Jason! i feel that it is written to honor someone's love in more than just one way. It gives a sense of passion with vivid images that can make somone's heart melt. One of my favorite lines are "You're all...That I was dreaming of..For the web you spun...Was made of love." These few lines really touched my heart and are able to make a person believe that love is a great thing. I feel that this poem holds plenty of emotions and deep meanings as well. For example the usage of the word "web" describes how well his/her partners love is in capturing them. Its shows the power and the ability of how one person can change another's mind, thoughts, and world. I also like how the writter is talking about the person and making him/her the object of their affection. He/she talks about how they influence them and how they have grown to love them so much. Its honestly a great poem and im glad to hear that you shared it with someone so special.

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